__ This "older" cloth is a slight "time edit" to my post of 3-9-2009; another weave. Smiles. _m
yarns of memory
woven through these snowy streets
an older cloth
yarns of memory
woven through these snowy streets
an older cloth
Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
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yawns of memory
the groundhog peeks through the snow
the same day repeats
Schnee und Reif von vielen Jahren... feine Bilder in diesem alten Tuch...
Lieber Magyar, das gefällt mir sehr, die Jahreszeiten wiederholen sich, wir
leben in ihnen..
Ich wünsche dir eine gute Zeit
von Herzen, Rachel
I love the cadence, the way you make your words into another world, one I'm grateful to be in DD
Thanks M_!
__ The "Yawns of memory," may well be the yarns; fine haiku echo, nifty_! The yawn... may be a metaphor. _m
Rachel,
__ To your 'snow and frost of the years,' today's snow always enlightens that of the past, grand seeing and we all I thank you! _m
LL,
__ There is that -pulse- and I believe the readers make that -other- world. The beat goes on_! My thanks LL_!
I like this one, very strong visual image
Smiles to you Juliet, I thank you_!
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