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__I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.

Monday, September 24, 2018

__ Friends, I had stepped aside for a while, this a very busy and complicated summer for my wife Kathy and I; no serious difficulties, we just sought to do all we could, within our "Activity Clock".  I had visited some, posted none, now... back for fun!
__ This, from one of my scribble books (10/03/04)...  a spider clung to that fallen leaf, and sailed that brook downward to the sea. 
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red leaf sails
this out brook to the sea
captain spider

8 comments:

haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...

Line 3 is a surprise!

Well done!

Adelaide said...

my special leaf
placed in the brook
the rough passage

Thanks, Magyar, for the inspiration

Ashi said...

there is nothing a spider would or can do in Autumn ;)

Edith said...

Lieber Magyar,
fein, du bist wieder da und gleich mit bildhaften Worten, die dem Herbst ebenbürtig sind.

Herzlichst,
Rachel

Magyar said...

__My deepest thanks, Angelica, Adelaide, Rachel and Jens... autumn begins another step along that brook of life! _m

Crafty Green Poet said...

I like the image of the spider as captain

grapeling said...

Does captain spider
Gimp a twig peg leg or three
Before spinning sails?

sandy said...

oh another good one.